今天分同学们分享一篇值得借鉴的托福写作模式,一共分为四段内容

值得我们借鉴的托福写作模式

在我们的上一篇文章《资深外教告诉你,他是如何点评一篇托福独立写作的文章!》中,我们知道了一篇托福考试独立写作的文章,考官会从文章的整体结构、内容、词汇以及句子的使用和写作语言这四个大方面来进行评分,因此,我们在写托福作文的时候,在这几个方面就要多下工夫了。


下面我们来看看,拿着一个托福独立写作的话题,考官会怎样去进行写作,我们可以好好地借鉴一下!


还是上篇文章中的一个托福独立写作话题:

Some University students wish to complete their studies in their home country, while others want to experience studying abroad.

Which choice is best? Give specific reasons.


我们来看看考官的写作模式是怎样的:


(第一段)Many students choose to study abroad for all or part: of their college career |1 believe that this is a much better idea than simply completing one's P studies in one's home country. (明确作者的观点,开门见山。)


(第二段)Studying abroad gives students an opportunity to learn about a new culture. What better way to learn about a foreign country than to actually, live in one?

Although living and studying in a foreign land can be stressful,at times, the opportunities that can be found far outweigh the difficulties. (选择出国留学的第一个理由,或者说是论据。)


(第三段)Furthermore, studying abroad can improve one's employment opportunities. In this modern era of globalization, knowledge of different cultures and languages can be a powerful asset.

Living abroad demonstrates that one is courageous and mentally tough; these qualities are attractive to potential employers.

Fluency in a foreign language opens up job opportunities that would normally be closed. (使用 "furthermore" 这个承接词,引导读者进入第二个论据。)


(第四段)To summarize, I believe that studying abroad is a much preferable option. It is I an experience that not everyone can have;

everyone I've ever talked to that I has studied abroad has recalled it as one of his or her fondest memories. (结尾再次强调作者的观点,并利用一个小论据再次支持作者的观点)


上面这四段考官,每一段的托福写作意图在段尾都有点明,同学们可以好好地结合上一篇文章(链接)中考生的托福独立写作的文章和老师的点评,借鉴和模仿考官的这种地道的写作模式和用词,加油!

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